Hello23
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2015-08-29T09:01:26Z
will some one be willing to do a spell / grammer / PSCT - check on a few of my custom made cards ?

ill send u the effects i made via private chat and we can disscuss how to improve their words , it shud be quick

thank u [:clap:]
Michael Lawrence Dee
2015-08-29T11:01:23Z
Originally Posted by: Hello23 

will some one be willing to do a spell / grammer / PSCT - check on a few of my custom made cards ?

ill send u the effects i made via private chat and we can disscuss how to improve their words , it shud be quick

thank u [:clap:]



https://www.ygopro.co/Fo...posts/t/16549/PSCT-Guide 
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Hello23
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2015-08-29T11:41:21Z
can some one pleas proof-read my custom cards ? i im-plemented psct on them but dont know where the errors are :

Alien Horseprower
[Monster|Effect]
At the end of the Damage Step, if a monster that battled this card loses ATK or DEF by this card's effect: Place 1 A-Counter on that monster, OR: If this card inflicted damage to your opponent by a direct attack; place 1 A-Counter on all monsters they control. (If a monster with an A-Counter battles an "Alien" monster, it loses 300 ATK and DEF for each A-Counter during damage calculation only.)

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Kindrindra
2015-08-30T03:25:41Z
I'm not sure what you're going for with the first part, but the second and first should probably two different effects, no 'OR' included. So something like: "If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent by a direct attack: Place 1 A-Counter on each monster your opponent controls."

If with the "OR" thing you were going for the monster only being able to use one effect per turn, even if it attacks twice through the Effect of Shark Fortress or something, you'll want 'You can only use one effect of "Alien Horseprower" per turn, and only once that turn.' at the end.

(Maybe for the first effect, you're going for something like "If this card battles a monster with an A-Counter: Place 1 A-Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step"?)
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Michael Lawrence Dee
2015-08-30T03:32:04Z
Just separate the effects. The OR is unnecessary. Even if it looks redundunt, I think it should be fine.
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Hello23
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2015-08-30T12:25:39Z
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Hello23
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2015-09-07T08:31:35Z
hello , PSCT ex-perts ?

i have another wierd effect which i would like some one to proof read for me in PSCT rulez :

Once per turn, if this is the first turn of the Duel: You can activate 1 of these effects.
● Target 1 monster your opponent controls with ATK less than or equal to this card's ATK; change this card you control from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position, then depending on your opponent's monster's ATK, destroy it and this card.
- Less ATK: Destroy that monster.
- Equal ATK: Destroy that monster and this card.
● Target 1 Set Spell/Trap Card your opponent controls; change this card you control from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position, and if you do, destroy it.


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